FIDGET SPINNERS
I believe that you should be aloud to have fidget spinners in class because.I am going to give you three ideas why you should be able to have fidget spinners in class these are my ideas.
- You can use them to calm you down by looking at them spinning them and even squeezing them.
- You can use them for a timer if you don't have a watch but you might want to run a bit fast like as fast as the fidget spinner can spin.
- You can use them when you're thinking and your page is loading and because if you don’t have an idea you can write about fidget spinners the way they spin and light up and glow in the dark and all that stuff, because you might be writing about fidget spinners.
From reading above now you can see that I think you should be aloud to have fidget spinners in the classroom.I hope I have convinced you into thinking that fidget spinners should be aloud in the classroom.
I love your last paragraph Chrysler!! Especially the part where you said "I hope I can convince you" because that is exactly the purpose of persuasive writing! You have some great ideas in here. Next time you should try to make your introduction as strong as your conclusion. Considering you were away for a lot of this you have done such a great job!!
ReplyDeleteHola Chrysler me Chelsea here.
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I think that fidget spinners sold be allowed in class because they are good for when you have nothing to do.
Next time can you say how you felt about doing this:)
Blog ya later.
hi me sophie here thank you for the ideas i am so going to do that
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Hi Chrysler TJ here fidget spinners are cool they are fun. but you have done a good job Blog u later.
ReplyDeleteHi Chrysler, my name is Richie and I am a Year 4 at Yaldhurst Model School. I like how you put fidget spinners on it and how you wrote about them. Your blog has been fun to look at and I hope my blog looks like yours one day. Please leave a comment on my blog.
ReplyDeleteWow you knocked my socks off with your post because I loved the gifs of spinning fidget spinners! I also think you have some great ideas for why we should have fidget spinners!
ReplyDeleteThe part about using them as a timer gave me a memory about when I used them to time my basic facts sheet in math!
Next time, you could re-read the first part because you have written because then full stop which tells me your sentence is missing a bit!
Do you know what the symbols on the spinner mean? I think the red and black one may offend some people… maybe you could change it to make your post better?
Hi Chrysler it is bailey here i liked that story about the fidegt spinners well done keep it up blog you later.
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