I woke up to a shock waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!πͺπͺπͺπππππππππΏπΏπΏ I said shut up.I was sooo annoyed that I could punch a hole in the wall urrrggg thank god i’m going to Jellie Park today I got up and got my breakfast eaten I got up from the table after my breakfast was finished and gone to school I went straight to jellie park in tanes car and we were at jellie park.I went into the changing rooms and got into my togs and went to get some sun block on my body and I went straight into the pool I went straight into the deep bit of the pool and jumped on one of the big floaties and took over all of them with my team mates I mean like the boys were my team mates then I got out and did a cannonball off of the big diving board I hoped not to look down but I had to. I managed to do it and survive.I still said I was going to do it in front of ethan.h.I went on the hydroslides next it was so fun it was like going down a wet ramp.
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hi my names is Dylan from gilber thorpe school i loved this text about jellie park and how u described what u did and who u went with and all that.when i started reading i sore that u used a really good word shock... did u think about this or did u just chuck ideas down from ur mind..... see ya
ReplyDeleteHi my name is dani and I like your writing about jelly park just add more detail like who are your team mates who are these boys eplain why but good job bye.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Bryalyn and I really like your writing about Jelly Park maybe next time you could add more detail, like who are in your team mates are but good job bye
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